- Narrative organisation
- Characterisation
- Mise en scene
- Use of genre conventions
- Editing/post production
Narrative organisation


Characterisation
Each short film had only a few main characters in them mainly just two. However, this is depending on how long the film is. But the way they are presented really allows the audience to understand who they are trying to portray, this could either be stereotypical or they play a character that was meant for them.
For example in "Waving at cars" the male character physically abuses his wife and the audience can see this by his actions. This is shown through the use of camera work, and sound mainly. There is a close up of his hand upon hers on the trolley showing he has a tight grip over her so she can't escape almost like she is trapped. The dialogue that is used his language and body language as well with it is very aggressive and he is very threatening and the audience can see this.
It is a lot like "The Archivist", where he is so obsessed with his girlfriend and the audience can see how far this goes. Again, this is shown through mise en scene and sound. Throughout the film there is the sound of the vacuum machine as the film goes on the audience recognise that, that sound is him wrapping something else up that his girlfriend had touched or even looked at. Each prop has a symbol of characterisation in this film because each one is about their relationship and how he as an unusual obsession with her.
I think the characterisation is very important in a short film because if their stories they are telling make no sense then the short film would have no narrative organisation. These conventions of short film need to work together to make a good short film.
It is a lot like "The Archivist", where he is so obsessed with his girlfriend and the audience can see how far this goes. Again, this is shown through mise en scene and sound. Throughout the film there is the sound of the vacuum machine as the film goes on the audience recognise that, that sound is him wrapping something else up that his girlfriend had touched or even looked at. Each prop has a symbol of characterisation in this film because each one is about their relationship and how he as an unusual obsession with her.
I think the characterisation is very important in a short film because if their stories they are telling make no sense then the short film would have no narrative organisation. These conventions of short film need to work together to make a good short film.
Mise en scene
The lighting in this film as well is very interesting, there is very little light when he is in the main room and this fits well with the film because it itself is quite dark and twisted. Also, what I noticed when watching the film I thought that when he was with his girlfriend in the beginning everything seemed brighter almost as if the lighting was fitting with the mood of the film because as it goes on and their relationship gets worse then the lighting gets darker.
The setting was good for all the films each one was in a different location which showed that short films can have variety and there not all in the same locations.
Genre Conventions
Editing
Alot of problems here Jenni - way way too superficial I am afraid. read the instructions carefully. Quite happy to sit down with you and go through this. I have printed comments for you if you collect from me tomorrow. this is not going to get out of level one as it stands.
ReplyDeleteyeah can you sit with me at some point i was really sure on the question i just gave it a go :)
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